2016-07-22 15:26:59 in Writing Tips / Advice by Hunor Barabas
Hey! I would like to have your opinion on the Pokemon story that I've written. It would mean a lot to know where I stand in terms of my English writing skills. Thanks to anyone in advance who gives me their opinion!
Yes, absolutely. By the way, about your avatar: I was wondering if you could explain what it means?
Now that you mention it I too want to know.
It is a reference to League of Legends, a game that I play. It was originally the logo of my website where people could share memes, cosplays and videos related to the game, but I closed it due to lack of time that I could dedicate to it
It was good! unlike mine your words are organized and professional. Loved the last line "a creature which is trained and used for battle who obeys his master without a doubt...a Pokémon!" Hats off to you!
Thank you very much! Yours was good too, don't be so down!
M. Ashraful, you just need to work on your flow and it would be just as professional; try to avoiding run-ons and long sentences.
2016-07-16 19:56:49 in Publishing by Esmeé
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